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If you find that your castle is collapsed, there is nothing to stop you to rebuild it again. If your career is down, nothing can stop you to have a new dream again. Maybe you are crying inside, but there is no laws to prevent you from having smiles. There are no reasons to make you lose your confidence and pride. Telling your sorrows in others' ears is not going to give you anything. Because other's mercy and sympathy, may be kindly and sincerely, yet cannot make you overcome anything. Rebuild your life! Because it is no use sighing or complaining. Be brave, and try again.

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There is nothing to stop you from building again when you found your castles have been crashed. There is nothing to stop you from dreaming again when the things that you worked for are smashed. There is no law to stop you from wearing a smile, though perhaps you are crying inside; there is never a reason for losing a grip on your faith and your pride. There is nothing to gain by recounting your woes into every listening ear for pity, and sympathy will not get you far, though it may be kind and sincere. Pluck up courage, and try again.


Vocabulary:

rebuild = build again

collapse = crash

smashed (adj p.p.) 打擊、擊碎

wear a smile

lose a grip on =>喪失了...(沒抓住)
lose one's grip =>失去控制、ㄌㄧㄚˇ ㄍㄨㄥˊ

faith = confidence 但faith還有信仰、心中支柱的意思

woe (n) 悲哀、悲痛

pity (n) 憐憫、同情
mercy (n) 寬恕、憐憫


同異點:
句子不用怕長!
用同類型的句型讀起來更會有節奏感
用字還不夠精準
修飾名詞要用形容詞(我居然犯了這個錯誤Q___Q)
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